mizz-iceberg

rather short. POst more. I really do enjoy your writing. Really amuses me!

The beginning was wonderful but I wasn't to impressed with the rest.

I totally agree with Kim. I especially loved the last stanza.

Sorry to say but I disagree with Perforated. No hard feelings I hope. I like your imagination and Alexial IS bit of a tougne twister but I really like it. ...

Well I was hoping that I would scare my readers enough that they might hesitate before putting their hands atop a mouse. Haha. Glad you guys liked it. :)

Yes I thought this was based on reality. Because your feelings felt so real and your character's so strong. I really enjoyed this. I'm going to check out your portfolio ...

Ok I made the changes. I hope I win the contest.

Yes it's short and but It's not retarded... I actually think it's the proper length, if you wrote it any longer it would not be so perfect. Paints a nice ...

Wow! Beautiful and deep. I can't really find anything to crit. about. Is any of this based on reality? Just curious. -icy.

Allright I edited it, tried to describe Milly's room better, corrected the typo's Roze pointed out. However I was having difficulty making one of my paragraphs flow smooother as PlusOne ...

OK I'll edit those typo's thanks for the crit. guys! And part of this actually happened to me. My older brother had used all my eye-shadow for fun, to make ...

ok Chocoholic I edited my piece and made the changes. Thanks for posting a reply. :) I haven't been getting very many reviews lately.

I agree with Room101. It's too short right now, and I don't even know what/who your main chracter is. But it does sound interesting and I'd like to read more ...

I hope this part will be included in book three! I've been waiting for the last book of Inheritance Triology for quite a while now. When is it going to ...

A sausage car....hmmmm. cute poem ;)