mizz-iceberg

Hey there, Jesse! I like this. I hope you'll continue writing this. Few things that I noticed: God! it felt like it was all his, like a king! He felt ...

Hello Leja! I loved this piece. I'd love to continue it. It was beautifully written and the descriptions created an effective mood through out the story. Just a few things ...

Hey Demeter! Everyone has pretty much already said what I wanted to say... so just get ready for more praise. Love your poetry. There's this certain style that you have ...

Hey D! Here by request :wink:. I actually really enjoyed this poem. The words were simple and the imagery was simple as well yet quite vivid and descriptive. I have ...

Well yes I don't speak Finnish :P. I also think; translated it probably doesn't sound as good as the version in Finnish. I mean, like here: This made the girl ...

Hmm, I usually don't critique poetry but the title caught my eye and I decided to check it out. Overall I really liked it and I think you've done very ...

I'm not going to tell you that it's overdone and cliche. As most things we experience in life have already been experienced some way or the other. So just because ...

Aww. *Hugs* I'm so glad you're writing this. It feels good to write down our emotions doesn't it? I think, to tell you the truth you should just first continue ...

Hey there! This story keeps get better and better :D. Few things: Something wasn’t right but she could figure out what. Do you mean 'couldn't'? Then she remembered: the truck, ...

Hey there Book worm! I'll first point out some things and then give you my over all opinion. Kareena swished her long violent purple hair out of her eyes and ...

Hey Marty! Wow ^ that's sad. There's nothing much I can say about this except that carry on writing it. I was extremely touched and you brought out your emotion ...

Don't let Vernon discourage you. He can be rather blunt, but he only means well. All the things he pointed out are true. But I think this poem is actually ...

This was amusing, not HAHAHA funny but amusing type funny... (??) I'm sometimes at a loss of words to explain my self and end up over explaining which just ends ...

I agree with Niteowl. Another thing I noticed is that you are being rather careless with your grammar. I reviewed another poem of yours just today an I noticed it ...

Ok I can see that you're trying very hard to convey some special feelings to the reader but I'm having a hard grasping exactly what you're message is. Your poem ...