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Re: POD 31- The First Step -On Both Accounts (rewrite)
I'm gonna get confused with the chapters :( I'm glad Tammy is back to help! I can't wait to see how it all goes! Meevs x
May 11, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #21
Just posting the end of the chapter here: Becca made a strange clicking noise in her mouth when she slept. It was like she was deliberately clicking her stupid buck ...
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #21
Lol JC there is a 19 and 20 you reviewed them! Thanks to everyone for reading this, will be posting the next part sometime today! Meevs x
May 10, 2007 -
Re: Mystery on Mystic Cove
I think Ofour said all that was needed here. It's very short....
May 9, 2007 -
Re: POD 29- Reminiscence and Regret -On Both Accounts
Argh more! You sure do leave it in suspense! Meevs x
May 9, 2007 -
Re: (Not) My Friend [Rewritten]
Wow, i liked it. Its so true about friendship. I especially loved the secrets out in pulbic bit, thats the problem, with falling out with people! Anyway, well done this ...
May 2, 2007 -
Re: Stars
Hey :D Thank you both for the replies, it is very much appreciated! Cheri- Thanks, I am going to add more to this, elaborate the characters more, i feel it ...
May 1, 2007 -
Re: POD 22 squared- and unwanted knowledge
I can't believe that now her friends have turned on her?!?!?! Gosh, this is such an emotional story, I'm amazed that you can write it so well! Meevs x
May 1, 2007 -
Re: POD 21- Apologies -On both accounts
OH it's just so sad, I feel so bad for Jamiy feeling the guilt of it all when really it was his own fault, yet its all fallen back on ...
May 1, 2007 -
Re: Thoughts of an Unsound Mind
Ok, i liked this but I'm not sure what its about really. Great range of vocabulary and yes a very mature sounding poem. Just not realllly completly sure of the ...
Apr 30, 2007 -
Re: Close Your Eyes #1
Ok finally finished this Stefan! it's a good start, but you defiantly need to work on this (like everyone does with their stuff). You could reall develop your ahcracters a ...
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Ice Cubes #15
I decided that Sappy would not know about this, as Sappy is based on my real best friend I decided that well I probably wouldn't want her knowing things like ...
Apr 29, 2007 -
Re: Dear Dale (Ice Cubes)
Thanks for al lthe reviews i will get down to sorting out the errors asap. Shriek - this isn't a part of a story called 'Ivy' Ivy was just a ...
Apr 28, 2007 -
Re: Close Your Eyes #1
Ok, I'm back :) (nice seeing you today btw :D) perpendicular to their farm and into the field beside their farms. Hmm that sounds a bit forced, do we need ...
Apr 27, 2007 -
Re: Close Your Eyes #1
Ok, I'm back :) (nice seeing you today btw :D) perpendicular to their farm and into the field beside their farms. Hmm that sounds a bit forced, do we need ...
Apr 27, 2007