miyaviloves

I really do love this, you writing is amazing end of :)

This does read like a poem, and its original, well done, a good read

I think that you writing it as an animal as the main character is one of the most interesting approaches you could write, thats why i love this so much ...

Ooo i really like this! Its very different to other poems i read, keep up the good work!

This is very good! Im sp impressed that you are only nine and already have this level of writing under your belt, your one to look out for!

This is rather sad but i do like it, and are you really 9? This is impressive for a 9 year old! Well done anyway

I loved the film and i think you did really well keeping it to the original story, i attempted writing a fanfiction for Spirited away but i could quite get ...

I have heard a few things like this, especially from my little cousin in the car when we are going on a family outing!

I like this, bought a smile to my face, good job :)

This is very sweet. This poem reminds me of school soo much, and i really love this!

Wow this is really good and i cant say anything you need to improve on. I will say this is one of the best poems i have read, well done

Short and sweet. And very true.

this is good, but is the Title 'My favourite things'? Cos if it is i would reccomend changing that cos of theconnection with The SOund of MUsic lol, but yes ...

This isnt junk so dont throw it out *Looks at comment above* It made me feel sad, but i think that your work is very different and i really like ...

Chapter one Yori made his way down the busy London street. Even after years of living in the busy capital of England he still found it strange how every person ...