mithrim96

Thank-you very much PixieStix, ElizabethHuntley, emilybrodo and wordsandwishes! I've revised the poem now and everyone's comments made me very happy. Thank-you!

This is really deep and beautiful. Is it a real story of your life? It's so emotive, I had tears in my eyes just reading it. This really got to ...

I'm sure this poem outlines the way we all think when we look in the mirror. It's a very contemplative poem - nice work!

I really like this poem. Its length is effective and your imagery is really great. Sorry I don't have time to talk more about it now, but I think it's ...

This is rather short but very thought-provoking. At times I felt it didn't flow properly (like in "We met in a time of war, Who was right, who was wrong?" ...

It's so true! I bet so many people live inside their shadows (I know I do a bit!) so it's really a great poem in the way of 'connecting with ...

If you go into "edit" next to the post (or in this case, lack-of) it should get rid of it... I think.

You're poem is really deep and meaningful. I love the fact that it originates from a true story (I presume that the spoiler is true...). You are a great poet ...

Thank-you shloka19! You don't know how good that makes me feel that you said that. Thank-you! This being my first post I am glad I got feedback so quickly, wow. ...