mithrim96

Thank-you for the review! I think reviewing a work is equal to writing a work: it's a personal experience, difficult to do and different for everyone so it's okay to ...

Thank-you for your review! Some context: Doki Doki Literature Club is a game which features a minigame where you choose words that the character creates a poem out of (the ...

Thanks ChocolateCello (great name by the way)! I'm glad you noticed this. I was actually trying to write the poem like some I've read in school - they have to ...

Thank-you greatly. I will take all of this advice to heart and start editing right now!

Thanks! I know I should probably explain a little more about what all the different powers and ranks are, but part of the story is finding out these things as ...

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Thank-you, I'll look over it again and fix what I can :)

This is an incredibly brilliant work, in my opinion, Em! It's really beautiful with the comparison and relationship between the angel and the demon. (I think I kinda see your ...

I know this is an old post but I was looking around YWS and happened upon this and fell in love. I absolutely adore the similarities to the actual 'The ...

Wow... cool... as in, wow... This is really intense. I love the way you described the running and then the bullet. One bit I wasn't happy with: (As Alliyah said) ...

Sorry I can't review this properly right now (and barefootrunner already said most of it) but I just have to say, I love the ending. "A good clan knows when ...

You know, I think I liked this first Chapter more than I liked the Prologue. Now you really need to continue this book, I want to read all about it. ...

I can't even imagine how that must be for you. If you ever want to talk, I'm here.

No need to apologize, I would be lost if not for spell-check. (I just proved that to myself by spelling apologize wrong!)

Definitely! I want to read much more of it. Let it be rainy and melancholy more often.