Murphy here for a review. Let me start off by saying I admire your creativity with words. I think that speaks highly of your character. I like that the poem flows easily and is easy to read. It sounds like an angry poem. Like something major happened and you just hate everyone and everything right now. I think the a lot of people can relate to that.
I think the only thing is spelling. I suck with punctuations and spelling so I can't judge haha.
Lovely job!
Points: 72
Reviews: 25
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