mistielovesyou

I don't exactly get the last part after the parting dots, but I'll comment on the story above: I really liked this. I don't get why you haven't been getting ...

Yeah, I agree with the previous reviewer. She already got you on all the poor writing, but the story didn't have any depth either. We just see her as an ...

This is very good. I liked how you went in and out of 'flashbacks' and the way you wrote this. It is kind of choppy with the flow in some ...

I think this is pretty good. I agree with the first reviewer when they say your details could be broken up a little more. The only problem with this is ...

The problem with this story is the CONSTANT cliches. I mean, every single character of yours seems to be some kind of stereotypical high school character. Very annoying and distracting. ...

I liked it. The details you added in were nice, especially about the ice on the frozen food. Added a nice quality to it. However, the characters you presented were ...

This is the type of writing that seems good at first glance, but it isn't. You really, REALLY should not write while listening to music. I used to do it ...

This is okay, but I don't think you pulled off the choppy, plain sentencing. VERY few writers can. This just comes off as unskilled writing to me. Although, I liked ...

This was a very good piece in an aesthetic way, but just okay story wise. Your descriptions and writing was really beautiful, but I can't tell if this story is ...

This was okay, because I could relate to the protagonist. Otherwise, it was rather predictable (like the other commentor) said. You could make the characters more interesting. This story was ...

I like how you wrote this. I liked that it was less symbolic and more stagnant, yet still good. This is a good story. Nice writing. Good job and good ...

Thanks for this, this was a reeeeeeally creepy story and I loved it. I haven't read something this crazy in a while, so this was nice. Kind of sadistic, though. ...

This was a nice story, and I loved how you incorporated the lines from them play into the story. Trust me, this isn't only your dream date. I liked the ...

This was a good story, but it could be improved with more background. I'd suggest you let the reader in on exactly why and how these people in Venice were ...

This was very good and detailed. I liked the point of view. This is probably one of the first stories I've read where the girl asks the guy out, so ...