misspriss

This is great work! I absoloughtly loved this. VERY NICE.

I'm not a poetry expert, so bear with me. This was really beautifully put, I mean, really pretty. But I didn't understand it.

I couldn't read this. Not that the spelling was that atrocious or anything...but the spacing. It really needs some work. SPACE SPACE SPACE! Everything was all crunched together. Once you ...

Awww...it's so sad! But it's truly ewly beautiful. I love it!

Awww...that's sweet. I completely disagree with Incan. He's always way to critical. This is not rubbish.

No, not serious. Just funny.

I didn't find it boring. I found it interesting...the only place that my attention drifted was at the "meeting" or whatever it is. Just try and make that a little ...

It's good...I like it, however, in the first chapter I got the impression that they were in an airplane...maybe I was just being unobservant...

Ouch. Somehow I knew that when Incandescence had commented, it wouldn't be a pretty sight.

It's ok, :? I know it's not very good, poetry isn't my thing, but I made up this poem with a little seven year old. :)

You don't need the ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~****Flash Back****~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ and ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~********End Flash Back********~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Just put that in Italics and make sur

Auh! She gets to be your new best buddy?! No fair! *sniff*

I...don't really understand this. The writing is magnificint, good form, spacing, spelling, grammar (from what I could see), but I just don't get it. The memories and thoughts are beautiful ...

Thank you for the least someone enjoyed it. (Not that I didn't appreciate the other critiques, it's just that it's nice to know someone like it, right?)

*sigh* Phorcys, your right...I'll review MUCH better next time.