mimimac

Hey, mimi here as requested! I was all set to do a long, line-by-line review... but I can't! There are hardly any faults in this piece and I found the ...

Prologue: The Land of Tales. Sometimes it was haunting and occasionally sad. But most of the time, it was a joyful place. A place where everyone lived happily ever after. ...

Hey! Wow... I can't believe that actually happened to you. :( I think you should be prud over how you reacted, instead of yelling at him and calling him one ...

Heber: "What the hell are you?" exactly WHO said this? the rude child?... if so, add something like: the child asked rudely such a rude child! But he is tall, ...

Hey, I'll be your reviewer today :) I have asked the question thousands of times. I have answered the question thousands of times. Always, the question remains the same, and ...

Hey! Mimi here as requested :) Sorry this review took so long but my internet is slow at the moment -.- I stood there for a moment not wanting to ...

Hi, I'll be reviewing this today, I'm only going to be doing the prologue bit for now because I don't have much time. I'll come back and continued tomorrow or ...

Hey! All in all this was an OK piece. To tell you the truth it was sort of boring; it lacked emotion and you only used dialogue and did not ...

Hey! Nice piece, I liked the beginning where she was trying to get herself to write the paper. Also loved how you compared different things to each other... When you ...

hey! Amazing job :D. The entire thing flowed beautifully and I was hooked from beginning to end! The only small thing I can nit-pick at is: They were deceived so ...

Ok... The bold writing are my thoughts.The underlined words and sentences are things I've added and the strikethroughs are... strikethroughs :P Malc; you’ve probably heard his name-after all, who ha

Ok... My comments are in bold and corrections underlined but there are hardly any because I could not find anything wrong with this really :D Countless majestic explosions littered the ...

Hey I liked this poem, the rhythm was good even though there were a few times where it fell short. The questions were awesome, and I can relate to the ...

hey! That was awesome! I was laughing so hard by the end of it. Especially the bit about Stephanie Meyer! She does do that haha! I must admit I adore ...

hi! That was awesome! I'm a big twilight fan but I have to agree with you and say at times it is RIDICULOUS. Also it is definitely cliche! You really ...