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Re: The Pecking
hey there! nice work! but you know you if would have classified this under the mystery/suspense section then it would have been more appealing. rest i liked your rhyming scheme ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: Lool the Backpack
hey, i'm glad i read your poem! it did really bring a smile on face and threw all my sadness that i had. good job! keep it up! hope to ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: a long wait
sorry, for the length. i just got in the flow... will keep it mind from now on. glad you liked reading it.
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: Drag Me To Hell
thanks for your honest reply. i hope i can solve all your issuses with my upcoming work/
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: To the Breakfast Uneaten
cool! brought water in my mouth! nice combination - food and comedy. i like it. but just keep in mind don't do comedy with food! it hurts in the end.
Sep 2, 2014 -
Re: To the Breakfast Uneaten
cool! brought water in my mouth! nice combination - food and danger.
Sep 2, 2014 -
Re: Keep going. Keep Living
wow! it was really heart touching. i never thought that a poem can be like this also. Thanks you gave me i nice thing to think. good work! keep up!
Sep 2, 2014
