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Re: My wet bolster and lap complain of my cries verse
Thank you so much for your review ! Appreciate it !
Aug 11 -
Re: My wet bolster and lap complain of my cries verse
Thank you so much for your review ! Most of my inspiration comes from poetry in my native tongue of Persian, where the trope of referencing the story of Layli ...
Aug 11 -
Re: O Lord, forgive the great sins we have shouldered! verse
Yes, I would definitely say it’s a “munājāt” if we wanna be technical. Thank you so much for the constructive review !
Aug 4 -
Re: O Lord, forgive the great sins we have shouldered! verse
thanks !
Aug 4 -
Re: Alas that this may be the final night verse
i loved this review ! thank you !
May 27 -
Re: Bāghbān’s Lyric Selection
Thank you very much for the constructive review. So when I mentioned "Hindu Slayer" it had nothing to do with Hinduism, it's the name of a mountain range. Also I'm ...
Jan 30 -
Re: Apparent are your sins quatrain
Thank you very much for the review, you have analysed this very deeply and I appreciate it greatly. I just feel like pointing out however, that "Love" in this instance ...
Jan 30 -
Re: The World is Changing
Nice poem
Jan 26 -
Re: غزل شماره ۱
Hello thanks for the review! It seems Copilot has done quite a shoddy job with the translation. I will refrain from giving actual interpretations as I feel that is not ...
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Re: the conquering of my death
Thanks, likewise.
Aug 3, 2025
