milabales11

Thank you so much! If you liked this, you might like my other poem titled, The Storm of Life. It's connected with this poem and I mentioned when I said, ...

Thanks so much!

Thanks so much for the advice!

Thank you!

Thanks so much for the suggestions. I wasn't sure to publish this or not because I knew it needed work but I wasn't sure how to fix it to my ...

Thanks for the suggestions and I'll look into it :)

Thank you so much!

Thanks so much for the suggestions. Haha, I'll try to make more happier pieces

This was very detailed and I got a clear image from "feathers for hair eyes like dark pools of midnight..." You did a great job of saying things with a ...

Done :)

Wow wow wow. It is very detailed with unique words. I loved how you said in the third paragraph, Halloween candy glued together with regret and an ego... Very unique ...

haha I know @Travis

...therefore, life is death

@Dracula thanks for the suggestions and I'll work on it :)

@SummerSunshine thanks maybe I will continue this