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Re: Ribbon Glass
I've gotta say this poem is very beautiful. You have made use of language artfully and I was able to get some great mental images. I agree with the reader ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Where the World Met the Sea
I LOVE THE BALLERINA ANALOGY MY GOD I'M PRACTICALLY FOAMING AT THE MOUTH FROM ITS AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!! (sorry I'm weird :P) Thank you for taking the time for your critique, I ...
Apr 23, 2013 -
Re: Saying Goodbye
Short. To the point. I love it (especially the smiley face at the end) -Sincerely your resident smart-ass :)
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Where There is Shadow There is Light
Thank you for actually taking the time and giving me some good feedback, and though I originally wrote it as flash fiction I agree with your idea it should be ...
Apr 7, 2013 -
Re: Right,"Goodbye"
I love your stream of conscious take on death, the franticness (if that's a word) complements it well
Apr 6, 2013