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Re: Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows
I'm not the sort of person who cries reading hp. My mum was annoyed at me cause I wouldn't let anyone else read it until I'd read it twice through. ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: The silent killer chapters 1&2
Hi HannahDutson_x I like this and I think that it has a goodplot but Idon't quite understand why this is in action and adventure. I see that PenNPaper has nit-picked ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Dragon's Lair [Chapter 1]
Hi kamorama I like this story quite a bit. I think the way that human and Illusimi are so different makes the story seem so real and lets the reader ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Astianna: Chapter Five
HI Kaedee I like it a lot and I only have one nit-pick I have never seen one Teleporting should be I have never seen anyone teleport. As per usual ...
Feb 22, 2010 -
Re: Unwanted {Name Is In Progress}
Hi AngerManagement I like the name of the story, it caught my attention and made me want to read. I agree with NYCnightowl007, the story is moving to fast and ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: (Undecided title) Star Wars Fanfiction.
Hi Apollo I like it and I think its good. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. I like the character and I want to ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: prolouge ~Fire and Ice~ a tale of a wolf
Hi MAri0O07 I like this prologue a lot. I only have one nit-pick and that is my hand hand starts to shake but I fight it off shouldn't there only ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: Run Short Prologue.
Hi Lydia Wow, that's a good prologue. I like the way the prologue gets me hooked without giving away to much of the story. If/when you post more can you ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: A Hole in the World - Chapter One
Hi SNDeane I like the beginning of this story. I only saw a few faults and those could be easily sorted if you re-read your story. Can you pm me ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: The Janitors -Chap1/Part 1: An Attack-
Hi TheNewHero I really like it. I think that the story has a really good plot. I can't see anything wrong with it so I have no nit-picks. midnightread :elephant:
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: The Dalek Doctor - Part 1
Hi EliteHusky I really like it. I think that you have a real talent for writing as the Doctor. I only saw a few problems and those could be sorted ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Such a Good Boy
Hi Lauren2010 I like this a lot. It shows that little kids remember what happened to them when they were little. It shows that if kids are taught things at ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Harry Cullen & Edward Potter
I've got to say Meep, you should send that to J.K and Meyer just to see what they think. I loved it. I may be a Twilight fan but hell ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Two (rated 12+ for fantasy and violence)
Hi GoldenQuill Thanks for the pm. I really like it. I like the way that you write, it makes the story seem more real. I think the way you introduce ...
Feb 16, 2010 -
Re: Prologue--From A Mother
Hi ireylcadence I like it I think but I don't quite get it. I understand why some words begin with a capital but not others. I may just be having ...
Feb 16, 2010