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midnightdreary

  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Quiet Blush

    Wow, that was super philosophical! I'm glad you shared that. I think you read further into my story than even I did lol. But I think everything you said basically ...

    Oct 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Quiet Blush

    Omg this was so much! Thank you! I'll totally keep this all in mind when I edit this. And if I do revise, I'll let you know.

    Oct 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Quiet Blush

    Thanks for the review! I'm kind of horrible at writing serious short stories, so this review was super helpful. I was super unsure of how I portrayed this, so thanks ...

    Oct 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Quiet Blush

    Thank you for the review! I like your comment on transition words, no one's ever told me about that in my writing. I pay attention to it when I write ...

    Oct 7, 2017
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: A Quiet Blush

    Thanks for the review! I really need to work on my short story writing, so I'm glad you gave me some good critiques!

    Oct 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky

    Thank you for your review! It's much appreciated. I'll make sure to take your suggestions into account.

    Sep 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky

    Thank you for your suggestions! I'll make sure to try and add them in!

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky

    Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Sky

    Thank you for the review! I'll make sure to try and add your suggestions in!

    Sep 16, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silence Inevitable

    Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed. Also your "this review is brought to you by" thing is super cool.

    Jul 31, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silence Inevitable

    Thank you! I'm glad you were able to relate to this. And yeah I was very unsure about the flow, so I'll make sure to fix that up!

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Silence Inevitable

    Thank you! I'm glad you liked my poem and I'll make sure to take your suggestions into account!

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Worth

    Thanks for the review! I'll be sure to keep those things in mind as I'm editing. Also, I love your username:)

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: LIFE-full song

    Cool, I'm sure your song will end up amazing!

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Never Be Alone Chapter 1 (LGBT)

    Okay! I'm excited to see what you write!

    Jul 23, 2017


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