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Thanks for the kind words and the constructive critique!

Nothing about this conversation has been productive or constructive, so I am tapping out. I hope you have a great day and continue writing.

Of course!

There isn%u2019t a single spelling error in this poem. Your initial comment has quite a few, as well as quite a few grammatical mistakes, so I%u2019d recommend brushing up on ...

Of course!

Thanks for the comments! The first 2 lines reference eating a mango and the 7th line also hints at mangoes. Beyond that, the poem provides images that mangoes remind me ...

Thanks for your input. Poetry does not have to rhyme, nor does it subscribe to any standardization, but I can understand where your comments are coming from. The first two ...

Thank you for your kind words, and the helpful critique!

Thanks for the review! :D I'll definitely try and clarify... well, everything! The idea behind the piece was someone being used within a relationship, but telling themselves that they're okay ...

Thanks so much for the kind words and the critique! I wrote this for a creative writing course I took two years ago where we were given six words and ...

Thanks so much for the review! It really means a lot :) My sophomore year in high school, I took a creative writing class and one of the prompts was ...

Why thank you, darling!

Why thank you, darling!

Thank you so much! I love reviews that are long and give me lots of pointers :) Michael

Thank you so much both of you for reviewing! I wrote this novel during last November's NaNoWriMo, so my writing has slightly improved since and most of these scenes were ...