michaeld

Hey there AncientForever!I really enjoyed the short, sweet, and to the point stanzas of this poem! They captured a dramatic mood very well! Crawl off to sleep with your gun ...

Ok, this was an amazing poem! I really enjoyed it and especially loved the wording you used! It wasn't huge "college words" like most people use to write their poetry, ...

I really enjoyed reading this! I love reading lyric poetry because I sort of put the words to music in my head, and then sing along! Everything was going really ...

Haha this really amused me! I especially loved how you made the reader the subject of the poem. It was very creative, and not many people can do it very ...

This was extremely beautifully written! I enjoyed reading every last bit of it and I'm going to enjoy reading every last bit of it again... and again! The way you ...

This was a beautiful and simple read!! I quite enjoyed it! It flowed very nicely and there were no grammatical mistakes that I could find :) Oh and Liesonlies, I ...

This was AMAZING! It was an easy read and quite humorous! (probably my favorite combination :P) The only thing that I found wrong, was here: -On the topic of Chocolate ...

Ok so first of all, I think that this was excellent! It was interesting, not too long and not too short, and it left me wanting more! Great job! The ...

Hmmm this is definitely a start. I didn't absolutely love it, but I didn't not like it either. So what I'm trying to say is, is that it's good. Part ...

I agree with Liesonlies and Paperbackheart that it was a bit dull and that almost all of it was repetition. As far as grammatical errors, I don't think I caught ...

This is beautiful! I loved, loved, loved it! I especially loved the twist at the end (well for me it was a twist) how you incorporated God. It was amazing! ...

This was really sweet! Also it was an easy read and very easy to follow. The only thing that stood out to me was at this part: Do not be ...

Wow. Just wow. This was absolutely fantastic!! I really enjoyed reading it! It was very beautifully written and it was very easy to follow and know what was going on! ...

You dream, Ok so already I'm confused. What is this 'dream'? Dust motes partaking, In exquisite dance, Above you. You slip, At peace, in silence, From this unhappy, Dreary world. ...

Hahaha I liked this! It flowed very well and it made sense! Not any grammatical errors but I do think that it could have done without the (Don’t you deny ...