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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: you are no longer the sun

    Such a strong poem that I feel like many people can relate to. (me) I love the way you added sentences wrapped with parenthesis after each stanza. It definitely adds ...

    Mar 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Alone but not lonely.

    AWWWW this poem is so cute. I'm a lover girl and love sweet poems like this. This was definitely very well thought-out and written. I enjoy your word play! Especially ...

    Mar 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Wishful

    This poem is sweet and short, which is my favorite!! I feel like there's a lot to dissect considering it's a short poem. It contains a very deep meaning that ...

    Mar 8, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Saints and Sinners

    I. love. this. poem. It is very intricate yet delicate, if that makes sense. I personally love the first stanza. I like the way you use the words sinner and ...

    Mar 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: wire

    This poem is very deep. It took me a second to understand what was truly going on. I was confused but the last two sentences REALLY pulled it together for ...

    Mar 8, 2024


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