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Hey :) This was still really good. I didn't see many grammar issues; I probably wouldn't be able to point any out. Yeah, anyways, I thought this was just as ...

Alright, nice start! Onto the review: Julia and Samantha were two girls who were different,[/b] but [s]the[/s] alike at the same time. They had been through it all together. [s]All ...

I'd read it. It took me a minute to understand the last line. That's just because my friends call me the stupid one because it takes me forever to understand ...

Hey, I really liked this and I only found one error. Baron and the fiery saliva of someone’s spite . I think you meant 'spit.' I really enjoyed this and ...

Oh, by the way, I love your avatar. :) Going to see them in concert soon. Anyways, this was a pretty good start to your story. Here are a few ...

[quote]“ I just feel like there’s something different about me , ” I said , my voice trailing off. “Well , no use thinking about it now. Come on , ...

Hey! You always review my stuff, so I'm reviewing yours. I think that Dudette got most of the nit-picks so I won't do that. I checked out the other parts, ...

Hello, Sorice. This was pretty good so far. Here are a few errors I found. "So , Hawk, whats on the menu?" asked B.J. Hunnicut Names should always be closed ...

So, you want harsh critiques? Well then, I shall rip this to shreds! Just kidding. I opened the door as quietly as I could. My mom may as well have ...

Hey! I enjoyed reading your story. You had beautiful description and I could really imagine the scenes. Especially the scene in the beginning. I like where you're going with this ...

Hey, I don't do dance, but I know what a pirouette is. Since I'm in gymnastics, I learned about them once. They are hard, I agree with that. So, anyways... ...

Hey, this was really well written. Onto the review! I growled at the phone, before giving it back to the secretary. I thought as I [s]glaring[/s] glared at the phone. ...

Hey, Saphirra. This was pretty good, although I didn't read the parts before this, I liked it. We were finally here, after much mind control and persuasion to let us ...

First of all, I live by Appleton, Wisconsin. Just thought I'd tell you that. :D Onto the review. My correction are in bold and comments in italics. I grew up ...

Hello, Bueberry! I'm going to review your story, so, here we go... Be honest, do you really, [s]truelly[/s] truly , hear me? But now,[/b] she's gone, not dead like in ...