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Did you by any chance base this poem on 'Dulce et Decorum est' and 'The Sentry' by Wilfred Owen, especially the last stanza? I think you're trying to acheive a ...

I thought this poem was.. okay. Teensy bit cliche and general and maybe try to make it more personal, use different imagery that no one would think of (unlike "the ...

I really like this. I like your style of writing- I can't put my finger on it but it's just quite believeable, realistic and not over the top at all. ...

I can see this song in a Ben Folds kind of style, listen to some of his stuff. "You broke the most important promise you made We’re not gonna share ...

i like this alot- really. Especially the "table drumming... real strumming" bit- but i thought certain things could do with just sharpening up a little: "I dont think she ever ...

I like it very much. Just one thing and obviously this is only personal opinion because you're writing it about you and you know what you want to say etc... ...

I really like this poem, I like the fluency and the voice throughout; it sounds real and heartfelt. Plus I sort of can relate.... Just a few things: "It doesn't ...

I have to say, I am positiviley enchanted by this poem (very english i know) I have no experience in this kind of thing and am not going to be ...