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Re: War
You brought out the gruesome reality of war, what war does to a soldier's mind. I like the perspective on the following lines, which tells that there's something greater than ...
May 14, 2020 -
Re: Nature
Nature has the power to heal! Nature is always surrounding us that we take everything it provides, for granted. Its time that we all appreciate Nature's givings and be grateful! ...
May 14, 2020 -
Re: i'm sorry
It calls out to all those not committed to what they call a 'relationship'. "“i’m not sorry” you corrected standing up for your pride for your future, your worth, your ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: Expressing your feelings is important.
Hey, I can totally relate to the drastic changes you (writer) witnessed in yourself. I feel that you could rephrase the following lines: "I realize as we grow up and ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: sweet brokenness
A true reality depicted, of women living in a patriarchy. I don't want to say it is amazing because of the experience of the trauma it leaves behind. However, you ...
May 13, 2020 -
Re: At night
A mysterious poem with a twist. I liked the way you try to see things that lead you to think positively (Only to realize, The door was your mind's fright), ...
May 11, 2020
