melodypond46

interesting song choice :) i had that stuck in my head for a week. Again just a few misspells and weird wording. if you need an editor i can help. ...

you're wording is a bit weird here and there, and you have a few spelling errors but as far as the entirety of the story goes, you've written travis very ...

(FIRST OFF, HELLO FELLOW WHOVIAN!!!) i know you don't have any rhymes here, that was the first thing i noticed. which is okay because not all poems need to rhyme. ...

I loved the story, but I just noticed a few errors. I don't think Elsa would be focusing on these horrible memories. As she said in Let It Go, "The ...

"Courtney was setting" ("Courtney was sitting") when saying someones name, and stating who they are to the person you mentioned before, use a comma. "Travis, her boyfriend.." or "Cassie, her ...

(“How did your day go?” Jett’s mom said) instead say "How did your day go?" Jett's mom ASKED. there are other sentences you phrase weird. you're very creative about the ...