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Hey Ganga! I took a little break now I'm back for more. He wrapped his hands around his throat and began choking on the blood that was pouring from his ...

Hey Abhilash! Here to give you a review as requested. This was a really sweet story. I enjoyed reading it. However, the beginning is really slow. If you hadn't asked, ...

Hey Pancake! I just wanted to drop a review as well. @InfiniteRectangles left an awesome review. Hopefully I'll be able to help a little. So, straight off, it's a little ...

Hey Ganga~ This was definitely an interesting chapter. A bit of a filler, but you got to have that sometimes to connect one plot point to another. One tiny thing ...

Ganga~ I think this is the best chapter yet. I really have very little to say. I love the beginning and how you see how the change from vampire to ...

Hey Ganga~ After another long intermission, I have returned to continue reviewing your novel. Maybe I can catch up by the end of summer... Man, you have some great reviewers ...

Heyo~ This was some of the best description of gore I've read in a long time. I didn't feel like it was overdone, but you weren't shy. We got hit ...

Hey~ This chapter is by far the best so far. Nico seems pretty legit. The mood is pretty grim. Seems like things have taken an interesting turn. There are a ...

Heyo~ Back as promised this time! Read through the reviews. Hope I don't repeat anything. Whoa. That ending was pretty intense though. Just a few things. I'm pretty sad that ...

Hi, Remember when you asked me to review your novel months ago, and I reviewed your prologue and said I'd be back soon, but that was also months ago? Well, ...

Man, tigeraye is on point! I'll try to help you out as well~ Okeydoke... First of all, there's some information that you repeat over and over again in almost every ...

Whoa. tigeraye left you a massive review. I'll try to add what I can. It sucks you've been in the Green Room this long. Well... No one seems to like ...

Ah. I'm familiar with this stage in the novel where your reviewer base drops off. T'is the life of a novelist, I suppose. This was by far your best chapter. ...

That was an exciting chapter! First off: Silenus’ corpse like spirit guardian’s animal form That's way too many words for one creature. We know it's corpse-like because you've said it ...

Well... Life got in the way of my plans to finish this in one week... Alas, I have returned! Lemme just skim through the reviews really quick and we'll jump ...