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thanks guys! sorry i'm so late getting back, i haven't been around very much to check things!

Here's a link to the video... the lyrics are a tad different! It's kinda... meh soundwise. Sorry.

Ooah, this sounds like it's a good song! I like it, but it's a bit creepy (: The only thing that really bothered me was that the spacing made it ...

Thanks guys! It definitely needs more work...this probably won't be the final version. I do however have a melody for it already

Thanks everyone for the reviews! I do have this recorded finally... It's not the best quality but it is decent. If you want it just pm me :)

CardDragon, that's Verse Two :p

Thanks! I really was worried it would turn out soppy, as you put it, so I am glad it's not! As for the tune, it's just some really simple chords ...

Oo, that's awesome! Do you know what chords or anything? When I read these lyrics I imagined a really slow song :)

Very pretty words! I agree, much better than Justine Beiber! Anyways, do you have music for these lyrics? It's such a beautiful song :)

thanks so much for your input! it's simply untitled because I haven't figured out what I want to call this song... as for the dashes, the lines were being strange ...

ooo, pretty! (: I really like this song! There were a few grammatical errors that I'll overlook for now, because the most important part of this is really the words ...

Hi! What lovely lyrics!! I absolutely loved this... I can totally hear a melody and everything!! I don't really have anything bad to say about it. I like the chorus ...

Hi! What lovely lyrics!! I absolutely loved this... I can totally hear a melody and everything!! I don't really have anything bad to say about it. I like the chorus ...

Hey, thanks for the input guys :) Actually Lily (can I call you that?), I've had my license for about a year... I just love driving, especially if I'm listening ...