mayyda

Ok, I liked the way you reviewed it, just to clarify the picture, let me explain a bit.... I never intended to sum up humanity but to bring a thought, ...

It's not about visualizing humanity but just a thought, thus I categorized it as general and reality. I never tried rhyming it and kept the way it is, so let's ...

Thanks, sure i'l considet this :)

Thanks for your kind words, just to tell my view of 'Folllowing One'....... it reflects following the righteous direction, could be a person, God or any other motivating source.

Follow the lines to get the meaning, don't derive meanings out of chunks since it came with the fact that he was hungry and too weak to stand on his ...

.Let me correct you...... u got it all wrong , i never meant neither wrote: dogs covering stars, Its completely absurd. It was clouds covering the moon then i came ...

Thanks , but i need to know why not to put title on top and the rhyming thing.For sure i'l consider these points, for my next poem.