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  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Just Another Day

    That was really good. Awesomeness! But God forbid that we have a thrid world war. And I think that you have a good imagination, thinking of how a third world ...

    Dec 19, 2010
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Sunrise for God *Edit*

    You can please God in many ways. You can help others, pray to Him, do what He would do, etc... I liked it because I was able to imagine the ...

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I Hate Him.

    Totally cute! I like the part where they 1st kiss.

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Love lies . (Please review) (:

    Basically Truth said everything. And I thought it was nice. Keep writing! max

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Worlds of Serendipity (prologue)

    I think it's very interesting, but I think you used she too much, but you were possibly trying to keep her name a secret so the readers could feel like ...

    Dec 4, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Awakened

    Thanks stephene.(:

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Being a Teenager

    I liked it. It was ok.

    Dec 2, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Domination of the (Slightly) Sarcastic Neon Muffin!!

    This was really funny! I was confused at first and lost but it's still funnee.I liked it!I love funny stories.

    Nov 28, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Spot

    Now if this is about teen acne I'm totally offended. But otherwise from a rate from 1-5 (5 being best) I give this a 3 and 1/2. But be confident ...

    Nov 28, 2010


They laugh at me because I'm different; I laugh at them because they're all the same.
— Kurt Cobain