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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Mother- A short

    Thank you!

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Thanks!

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Thanks! I'll go through and catch those errors!

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Thank you!

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Thanks for the great review! I'll definitely take everything you said into consideration.

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Legacy of Bob- The Fair Maiden

    Thanks! I may be posting the other ones of the series soon.

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Mother- A short

    Thank you for the review! Yeah, it is those clashing forces that really helped make the story come together. I wouldn't say their is a completely fixed message to it, ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Mother- A short

    Thank you so much for the great review! I'm glad it all came across well, I was worried that people might not get the message behind it. I really had ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Final Words

    Great emotion behind this poem. It was very well written and it held a personal message inside. Great piece

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Mother- A short

    My bad, I didn't even notice I left it in.

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Action / Adventure Re: Removed at the author's request

    I really enjoyed this piece. It had great imagery and a gripping intro that only continued to get better throughout the story. Like Asteria said, don't doubt yourself. You can ...

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Bruise-Blue

    I like the casual tone the conversation held even though they knew what was coming. The writing flowed smoothly. Good work :D

    Jun 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: Mother- A short

    Jun 23, 2014


A good artist should be isolated. If he isn't isolated, something is wrong.
— Orson Welles