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This is extremely cute! :) Good job, I love it. :) Oh, and I agree with Sohini, Wet Flowers is really a perfect title. Plus it caught my attention. Kudos ...

Oh my. I agree, your friend is going, or did, cry his/her eyes out. You are extremely good at writing poetry! With fantastic words. I can relate to every word ...

Wow. All I can say is wow. Like others have said, your rhymes are fabulous. Whenever I try to rhyme, it makes my poems pretty lame because it doesn't even ...

Ooooh best books ever. :) I really liked this poem. It fits really well with the story, and my only critism is when you said "Ago" as one line, it ...

Past the broken window, Seeing into empty halls, Shadows of the past are leaking in. Again... Curses of the incognito, Chasing into the parks. We have gotten closer, To completly ...

I agree with ChernobyllyInclined that the story needs to be more developed before he acually leaves. You're going a bit fast, just slow down, and add some more description, and ...

Very nice. I liked it a lot, your writing has good flow. I liked all your similies too. When I first got a clue that Jason was dead was when ...

This is an interesting story. Sad. :( I liked it though. It was unique. Though these things bothered me: I didn't get the first paragraph, did the man walking down ...

This was really sad but well written. The only thing that worries me is it all seems to go a little fast. There were many events happening, and the story ...

I really liked this poem :D I think the amount of perfects are perfect now... hehe This poem I can really relate too, I feel the same way with some ...