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I liked the simplicity of it.I thought it was really really good.

I have to agree with Firestarter about the last 2 lines of the first stanza but I did enjoy the poem.

The only book on your list that I have read is On the Road by Jack kerouac. I really enjoyed the book. I love the works written by the beat ...

I liked the poem. But I am not the best person for critqueing poems. But it was cool I liked it.

I hate going to the mall except for the book store and hot topic(love that place). The only place besides hot topic I like to go shoping for clothes is ...

I also loved that book so much.I cried so much when I read it(as much as the ending in we were soldiers)

Yeah it was a little bit to short. I think it would be better if you expanded it like why she is depressed.

Nite I liked it and I liked the chorus

Nite I enjoyed this poem. And it is not the stupidest poem you have ever posted.

Yeah I really liked the poem. Incandescence you are an amazing poet

I have started reading adult novels because teen books were not even challenging and didn't make me think.

OMG Bras that was sooooooooo cool. You know you really have a future in writing.

Do you have any POTO ones please.

Thanks for the criticism. I am very horrible at where to place punctuation in a poem. It also has been a really long time since I wrote a poem. I ...

that was a really good story.you wrote one of this pieces that just makes you think.i wonder if you got an a onyour story