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Re: My New Life
Hi there. I think Caitlin is a demigod, right? If you make her a child of the big three, I think she can show some power during fighting the Minotaur ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: The Fallen Princess: Chapter One, The Past
Hi there! Is this the story of Disney princess Elsa?? Nevermind. It was good. Its high time since I read this kind of fairy tale. I would be happy to ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: Afraid that I'm not
Hi there! Writing a review! Your story is good. But I think u should be more careful about the dialogues. I was having difficulty in understanding them. Otherwise, it was ...
Mar 24, 2018 -
Re: Shapeshifter's Academy (Chapter 1)
That was great!! Sometimes we also wait for something. When we do not get that it's so irritating. Like I always wait that when my birthday will come I will ...
Nov 7, 2014 -
Re: The Faceless Angel - Chapter 1
Really horrible!! U r an awesome writer. Great job. But is this story real. I don't think so. So if it was real what would u do?? I had such ...
Nov 6, 2014
