magiccharm2002

Thanks again for the the great advice. I%u2019ll defiantly keep those changes in mind when editing.

Thank you! Ya I kind of agree with the last rhyme as well. I was having some difficulty coming up with the right word

Thankyou! I%u2019m so happy that you understood the whole meaning of poem. Also, thankyou for reminding me about the capitalization.

Hey, I made a some changes. Most likely it still needs some work but I think it turned out ok. Also, thank you all for your input. It was very ...

Thank you! Ill definitely keep that in mind.

Thank you! Your help is definitely worth while to read and a lot of help. Especially since I am Actually very new to the world of poetry. I have to ...

Thanks for the input! Also, don't be afraid to speak your mind in your reviews because every bit of everyone's opinions matter to me. they also help me to become ...

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Thank you so much! I will definitely consider your opinion.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It makes me think of when I'm driving down a country road at night. You also, showed very good visuals in the descriptions. Keep ...