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maegardens

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Death's Riddle

    This isn't a review, just praising the story. I read it a few years ago and haven't used the site that much since then. This was very thought provoking and ...

    Feb 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Write

    Very well written. Can definantly relate to it :)

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Horrendous Rock Concert

    Haha, yeah, I wrote most of this right after the concert so I didn't forget... Wasn't planning on posting it, but I did, any how. It wasn't THAT horrible... *vivid ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Fighting For Love (probably will change title) Ch. 1: Adam

    Thank you guys for reviewing! The whole thing with her knowing his name before he told her it was a bit embarrassing... Haha, but thanks for pointing it out, probably ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Raising Fame

    Thanks Attolia! I haven't put much thought into this story. The pop star is supposed to be a little bit washed up, like this is the near end of her ...

    Jun 8, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Who is My Daughter? Chapter 2

    Hey guys, thanks for the reviews... I know, it's a little shabby, mainly just to explain what happened....I do that a lot in my stories, sorry.

    May 3, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: With a Dying Breath (PG-13) (edited)

    I can't review. Well, not in 250 characters anyway. All I can say is: That was beautiful, awesome, sad, great. And probably a lot of other positive descriptions I can't ...

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Who is my Daughter?

    Lauren2010, I have actually been working on this more so I'd say, yes, this is probably going to be my first chapter to a larger story. Thanks for the review!

    Mar 24, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Two Gay Poems

    silented1, I know. I was thinking of doing a lesbian poem, too. But it's hard to find rhymes that rhyme with lesbian, and usually the words aren't what I'm looking ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I can't do it, I can't move on

    I think it was a good poem. If you want to turn it into a song, then turn it into a song! I encourage you to do whatever you want ...

    Mar 10, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Harry Potter 3OH!3 song parody

    Two words: Freaking Hilarious!!!! Great job! I'm in between with Twilight and Harry Potter, but I think I'm going more for Harry Potter. OK, I'm definantly for team Harry Potter. ...

    Mar 4, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: What REALLY Happens in Middle School Ch. 2

    budding writer, Thank you for the review. I know, it was a bit of a mediocre chapter. And, the thing about the gum is that my science teacher a few ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Angels and Vampires: Part 1

    Hello, again, forgottenfallen I like your changes, and how you explained the angels' name, Lexus. I think you did a very good job with the first one, but an even ...

    Jan 8, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Two Gay Poems

    Hey, thanks for all the reviews guys! And, lemonly, it is kind of a humorous poem.

    Dec 30, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Tears

    Thanks!!

    Dec 30, 2009


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