maegardens

This was really good! I wrote a poem kind of like it, too, a while ago. It's good to let out emotions through poetry (even if they are/aren't yours). It ...

Hey, this was really cool. I love roller coasters, as long as their hills aren't bigger than a building down town in the city. :) I that one typo has ...

OK, first I would like to cover the few typos I found. In this paragraph I thought you added a bit too many "met's" and when Paula asked "So how ...

Hey Wariofart (Great name!), I don't think it should be rated 18 and up, first of all. But then again, that may just be me :). Wow, this was really ...

I like what you have here. I think maybe you should go deeper into the story. Maybe add what was written. For example will the character not write any more ...

Hello WritingWords! I'll go through the little nitpicks first. Oh, I don't know if you'd like to do this, but I was thinking of spacing out the paragraphs maybe a ...

Hi, WritingWords (love your name, by the way). This is maegardens. First I'll just get over with the nitpicks. “Ann, that bad habit of you jumping down the stairs should ...

These are just all the typos that I found, and then I'll get to the REAL stuff. Exciting, these reviews, huh? And "love" isn ' t the most interesting thing ...

This was awesome. This is a true story? Aww... That kind of sucks, then. It was still a really good story, and I liked how you described the scenery and ...

Awesome awesome AWESOME story! Please please write a sequel! PM if you do! OK, the only typo I spotted was in the last paragraph when you said, "Pulling away Juliet, ...

Hi EdgarAllanPoet. This was a very good story, and you left it at a cliff hanger. Are you going to make a sequel? You have a few typos here and ...

Hello, forgottenfallen, maegardens here to review. I'll start with the nitpicks. “So, how are we going to light this? I think you forgot to add an 'are' to his dialogue. ...

Hi! This is really good. I didn't find many nitpicks, and I think you worded it well. And, I'm sorely tempted to tell you to please make it into a ...

I'm so sorry. I haven't experienced a very big death in my life, (knock on wood) except for my dog who died of cancer, and my great great grandmother. This ...

Hi forgottenfallen, This seems to be kind of like the book by Neil Gaiman, Stardust. I don't know, the story just reminds me of that book. I didn't seem to ...