lulu_daisy_101

I like it...I do...but in some stanzas, I find that it doesn't flow. I think u should edit it and make the sections that don't flow, flow. Like this My ...

I really like it because its short and precise. It actually touched me and made me feel emotions that I was tricking myself to not believe in. It opened my ...

I thought this poem was quite good. I also thought it was quite choppy and it was start a sentence, finish a sentence sort ove thing. I did not flow, ...

The marine touched me in a weird way that I have never been touched in before, and it makes me sad and happy at the same time :( :D. I ...

I got a little board in it and I don't no why? There was the occasional grammar mistakes and somethings had wrong tenses but the whole thing in total was ...

OHHHH.....AND BY THE WAY, IT ALMOST MADE ME CRY.....because its just soooo emotional and I LOVE IT :D :D :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -LULU_DAISY_101