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Re: Rain
Hi Its 3K here just dropping in. I see that you are trying to express a sort of sadness in this poem, and I think its pretty good. I do ...
Nov 13, 2012 -
Re: A game of hide and seek...
Hey its 3K and I have to say that the rythem is off with the goddamn pricks a d the I'm fed of your is weird too it would sound ...
Nov 13, 2012 -
Re: Deleted 31
SO YEAH
Nov 13, 2012 -
Re: Letter for the Better
I think his may be good if u were writing a poetic novel and we knew who the people were and who you were but this isn't a personal diary ...
Nov 12, 2012 -
Re: Forever in Time Chapter One
Accck! I am so stupid! Forgot to check AGAIN!!!!! l v l v
Jul 29, 2012 -
Re: Bloody Wings
Hi. I kinda agee with Story Weaver on this one. I mean, I've written five things like this. So have my friends. Except the thing is... the one's that I ...
Jul 28, 2012 -
Re: Colors of Creation
This is a really good piece. I like it because you use metaphors so beautifully and you seem to use the wording perfectly. I also like how you used your ...
Apr 30, 2012