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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Rain

    Hi Its 3K here just dropping in. I see that you are trying to express a sort of sadness in this poem, and I think its pretty good. I do ...

    Nov 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: A game of hide and seek...

    Hey its 3K and I have to say that the rythem is off with the goddamn pricks a d the I'm fed of your is weird too it would sound ...

    Nov 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Deleted 31

    SO YEAH

    Nov 13, 2012
  • Other » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Letter for the Better

    I think his may be good if u were writing a poetic novel and we knew who the people were and who you were but this isn't a personal diary ...

    Nov 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Forever in Time Chapter One

    Accck! I am so stupid! Forgot to check AGAIN!!!!! l v l v

    Jul 29, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Bloody Wings

    Hi. I kinda agee with Story Weaver on this one. I mean, I've written five things like this. So have my friends. Except the thing is... the one's that I ...

    Jul 28, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors of Creation

    This is a really good piece. I like it because you use metaphors so beautifully and you seem to use the wording perfectly. I also like how you used your ...

    Apr 30, 2012


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien