lubnafirdaus

Thanks for the review! I love the sappy comment

Hey! Thanks for the review! The structure of the poem or the 'extra wordy nature' is because I wanted it to be semi-formal. Coming to the 3rd stanza, I would ...

Thank you! 'While uncertainty fills my lungs' also refers to the imaginary storm that looms around the narrator. Like air fills the lungs but the case here is the storm ...

It’s a well-written piece!

Indeed...it's a never-ending pursuit in the story we call 'life'...

Thank you!

Thank you! I appreciate the review being so detailed. The line "A heavy heart is celebrating" means faking happiness and yes, sadness is celebrated (a funeral is a celebration in ...

Thank you!

Thank you! In the last stanza, the lines could either mean the sky or a person depending on the reader's mood ;) Personally, I wrote it with a person in ...

It's beautiful!

Galloping in the orchard signifies freedom and success and the last train means trying to win a losing battle. But I leave it to the readers to interpret it and ...

Thanks! I love how detailed your review is! I appreciate the time and effort you put into reading my work and leaving a review!