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Re: Into Thin Air - Chapter One (REVISED VERSION AS OF 4/1/11)
Hi! Wow, this is really good! I adore your wonderful way of writing, very creative and beautiful. I cannot wait to read the rest! I really enjoyed it, thanks for ...
Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:36 pm -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 4-5
Hey! So chapters 4 and 5 where very good, but I was wondering if this is a true story? Again, you have very beautiful writing and I enjoy your story ...
Mon Jan 17, 2011 11:21 pm -
Re: Thief.
Hi! Wow, that was really amazing. You have an amazing way of writing, you can describe emotion and feelings so well! It was very sad and I am sorry about ...
Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:39 pm -
Re: A Summer's Dream
Hi! Wow! That was really beautiful. I am sure that your uncle would be very proud of you right now. I am very sorry about his loss and yours. I ...
Sun Jan 16, 2011 11:27 pm -
Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind
Hi! I loved it so much, and it was very true! You did a great job and you were very creative. Your rhyming wa pretty good and I hope to ...
Thu Jan 13, 2011 3:01 am -
Re: Monsters Are Real
Hey! Wow, this was really good! I liked how you wrote simple actions to create a story! You have a very good way of writing and I enjoyed your poem ...
Sun Jan 09, 2011 4:25 pm -
Re: When We First Met
This poem was very sweet, but I do feel like you could have written more, because there are so many ways to describe love. your writing is fabulous! ~JVM
Fri Dec 03, 2010 2:03 am -
Re: Dreams
Wow, that was really touching for some reason. Its like my senses where tuned into what you where writing. It was kinda bittersweet to me, and very breathtaking. Great job! ...
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:41 am -
Re: Departure
Hi! I LOVE your stories!*purple, eep!* You are so creative with your writing, how old were u when u wrote this! ~JVM
Fri Dec 03, 2010 1:30 am