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Hey, This piece had a good flow to it aand I enjoyed reading it. There were a few things I want to talk about though. I liked the idea of ...

Hey glitterbox, This is a really different piece from your last one, and it was really interesting. I loved the way you wrote this because it gave you more of ...

Hey, I loved this :) Karma is a very unique character and you could easily make this into more of a story if you wanted to. She's a bit crazy ...

This was an interesting story and there were a lot of spelling and grammer mistakes. So many that I'm not going to go through them. I got where you were ...

Hey, This is one of thee funniest stories I've read on this site. I especially loved the bits when Harry and Voldemort were talking because what they said was so ...

Hey, I really liked the start of this, it gave a really good mood to start up a story. I also liked the way the character narrated, he/she sounded quite ...

Hey, I love the idea, it sounds srious, but always with a kind of amusing note because of the type of creatures in it. There is one just one mistake ...

Hey, I found this story very interesting. At the beginning, I was a bit confused with what this story was going to be about. I wasn't sure if I was ...

This was quite a different kind of story. It started off well, I enjoyed the first bit. But then it went into the part about Atlantis and I found myself ...

Hey, I really liked this prologue, it gave me a good introduction to the story, but I was a bit unsure about what the star thing was about. You could ...