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Re: Small pile of sand
Honestly this is not a bad story. I don't get the meaning of it as of yet, but it sounds really good. I ask the reading teacher if I can ...
Tue Nov 04, 2025 3:01 pm -
Re: Window of Truth
I just love this part of the poem. I was sitting by the window, watching young love bloom — in the flutter of birds, in the hands of strangers, while ...
Tue Nov 04, 2025 2:07 pm -
Re: Maturity- The unwanted Upgrade
Let me just say this was a great poem. I'm 14 years old and I still don't want to grow up. Being a grownup just scares me. And maturing is ...
Mon Nov 03, 2025 7:30 pm -
Re: I don't understand.
And im sorry I did use Copilot, because I just wanted to make it long :(
Fri Oct 31, 2025 7:04 pm -
Re: I don't understand.
You're welcome!
Fri Oct 31, 2025 7:01 pm -
Re: Where have all the little Boys and Girls gone?
Thank you so much for your review! You did interpret the poem in the right way, and I had originally wanted it to be horror, but thank you!
Fri Oct 31, 2025 7:00 pm -
Re: "Questions"
I feel like this is a poem we can all relate to. I sometimes ask myself these daily questions. Or I'll look at myself in the mirror and just wonder, ...
Fri Oct 31, 2025 2:15 pm -
Re: "Questions"
I feel like this is a poem we can all relate to. I sometimes ask myself these daily questions. Or I'll look at myself in the mirror and just wonder, ...
Fri Oct 31, 2025 2:15 pm -
Re: "Questions"
I feel like this is a poem we can all relate to. I sometimes ask myself these daily questions. Or I'll look at myself in the mirror and just wonder, ...
Fri Oct 31, 2025 2:15 pm -
Re: Grief in a New Era
good story
Thu Oct 30, 2025 2:56 pm -
Re: Til' Death Do Us Part
Rarely few things make me cry, but this indeed did. I really liked the part Why did you break that promise my love Why is it that I'm still here, ...
Thu Oct 30, 2025 2:41 pm -
Re: Crush...?
OMG! This poem described me in the best possible way. And it is soooo cute too! I like how you have the part 'Crush? Friend? That is so adorable!
Thu Oct 30, 2025 2:32 pm -
Re: Crush...?
OMG! This poem described me in the best possible way. And it is soooo cute too! I like how you have the part 'Crush? Friend? That is so adorable!
Thu Oct 30, 2025 2:32 pm -
Re: my arms
another part you could have added, 'wish I didn;t have to cover them up' but overall a good poem
Thu Oct 30, 2025 2:29 pm -
Re: LIGHTNING BEFORE THE THUNDER
I really really really like this poem! I feel like what you wrote about lightning wouldn't be known without thunder. All people ever think about is the lightening. And it ...
Wed Sep 10, 2025 2:21 pm
