lostthought

Ok, I'm here to review! Ok, contrary to faith, I did see several small mistakes, which can be seen in the spoiler below. I've got no one to look up. ...

"Those alike are also very different. -anonymous" Ok, so that quote up there means something. That quote means that those who are alike have a tenancy to have a different ...

Dreamy! Ok, so you have this work and it hasn't been reviewed. So, I'm stepping in to review." Burning hallow he looked at her. Her calmness eroding his patience. -Ok, ...

Noooo! How could you! Eve's eggs, they are gone, gone! Ok, now that I got that out of the way, let's review! Let's start with the nitpicks. The only one ...

Ok, heart, I'm here to review. As for nitpicks, I saw none. Your grammar and spelling was flawless. As for my opinion, technically robots have been in movies. You know ...

Ok, I'm here to review. I decided to do the nitpicks last. K.C seems unsure of his feelings right now. Abby seems to be messing around with his feelings. Ooh, ...

Ok, here to review. Welcome to YWS! , Nitpicks: Ok, so instead of quotation marks you used apostrophes. Also along the means of dialogue, you actually do put the marks ...

Ok, I'm here to review. Let's go on to the nitpicks! Ok, I hate to be the party pooper but I have to say that this paragraph has to be ...

Ok, so I'm here to review. Ok, I hate it when you people write so well I am left with no nitpicks. No grammar issues, everything is all spelled correctly, ...

My, my. This dinosaur has been long awaiting a review. Let's give it what it needs rather than wants. You had to put Flowers In the Attic didn't you? We ...

Ok Lucre, I'm here to review on this really small kindle so bear with me. No! You have to leave! Ok, this is a sad chapter. *cries* No, he died! ...

Hi lucre! Let's review (before Goldilocks beats me to the punch)! Ok, I see how at the bottom you say this is a little rough. I think it is just ...

Ok,here to review. You shouldn't make random stuff up just to post it for giggles. YWSers have to review this stuff and it makes it harder if you aren't serious ...

*scrutinizes piece* I love the reputation. It's just right. Not too randomly spaced and put at the right spots as to not make it sound horrible. My favorite line is: ...

Ok, let's review! Let's start with the nitpicks. The dessert landscape they’d been walking on for days, once was a highway. -I didn't know that a dessert was a landscape. ...