lordgluzman

Really good. But I think that the world lies partly. (Don't be angry it is just what I think) Still you used really good words! Great job. I liked it!

The ending of the last chapter: “No! No. I don’t want any more lies.” I mad a deep breath “I love.” All of a sudden I felt her lips touch ...

Not bad my freind, but it is just the begging! It is really cool but too short. I am a typ of guy that likes long poems and lyrics!

Great poems espacially the second one. It was funny but I didn't fined any cursing in your poem. Good Job!

Poem of the Prisoner As I lay in a cage I heart is beating with rage I still have the shame Who am I to blame "I heart is beating ...

I imagine me singing this and my friend lord Anzius playing on the guitar! It was like Rock. Your descriptions are really good. No grammar mistakes. Really touching but really ...

It was pretty good but too short. If you would have made it longer and explain more about the beliefs I would really like it.

Really Good and interesting. But I didn't understand the part where the two teams were training. Did they fire real bullets or what? If you can please reply back and ...

It's ok, But I don't know what should I then put insted of: Maybe you did kill I guess you will have to pay the devil a bill

Hi, lordgluzman said it right. I agree with him. Your songs are filthy. That's certainly no way to get respect in life. Your songs focus on things that last in ...

THis was so funny dude. I couldnt stop laughing. I hope you got a 100% on it. But their was one problem I didn't understand what the troll was talking ...

never give up

That was really really touching. In fact I had a little melody in my head for this poem. But I am a rhyming person! But who cares as long the ...

I really liked it it was good,sad I could feel the sadness! But their was one problem it was too short. The longer you write poems the more interesting it ...

Never give up