lordgluzman

Ignorance, stupidity Is all there seems to be. Shallow hearts and minds. The opposite of me. Your not alone. I know your pain. And i would like to bare. This ...

Coolio, I will give you a star, but I don't get it in some parts. For example what is Blink 182? Also I think you should take out: Give them ...

That was pretty coolio but most of the rhyming was forced, when I was reading your poem I under stood that you were telling drugs are bad but in some ...

Super cool! Awesome action. Their is no grammar mistakes. Really descriptive. I totally disagree with Griffinkeeper. In fact I would like to say that every person has a rite to ...

Super Good. I could even sing it as a rock song. No grammer mestakes. All your rhymes were good. Thumbs Up! Your poem was long, Very Good! You had feelings ...

I’ll miss you if you go away, The grace you leave behind, Your words were songs of serenity. Every step you take steals you further away. I am left alone, ...

That is a really smart poem. It seam’s to me you write the best poems out of all my friends and other people that I have read their poems. I ...

really good, It had beautiful words. But I didn't like the last paragraph. Because first you are saying "What a great season" Then you are saying "But my poem sucks" ...

Really good! I am going to try to play this on my bass. Your song is really touching. I understand how is it like when you are being kicked around ...

That was pretty funny but I think the reason why people comment your songs bad it's because of the dirty language. But I still like your songs. I am just ...

It was really nice and good. The words and the rhyming were awsome! I dont know if you have grammer mestakes but I couldnt fined them. Just to give you ...

Mmmmm. Terrible, terrible. This is what people call "emo" poetry. It's nonesense really. It's just words that rhyme--and I bet you right now millions of people all over the world ...

Dude that was really short WHY DO YOU PEOPLE WRITE SHORT STORYS AND POEMS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN IT. WHEN WILL EVER LEARN WRITERS???????????????????????????? sorry..... Anzius you should stop

Really well written (you have a good imagination of heaven) I hope heaven will be like that when I die. I didn't really fined any grammar mestakes. I think you ...

I am sorry but I didn't really like it. Your song was not unusual. Things what you wrote I usually hear everyday on the radio or read it on this ...