Published October 28, 2008
I’ll miss you if you go away,
The grace you leave behind,
Your words were songs of serenity.
Every step you take steals you further away.
I am left alone,
I don’t know how to live,
When you left,
My heart left with you.
My soul has abandoned me,
I look inside,
I’m wandering, confused, lost to myself,
You’re lost to me too.
We’re lost to the world.
My fantasies are left hollow.
Nothing flows through,
No feelings, no life, no you.
I’ll miss you when you’re gone.
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I did like this poem but it is too short for me. I am a typ of person that likes long songs and poems. But still really sad and good.