lordgluzman

I promised that I will critt your poems, so here I am! I like point of the storey in the poem. It is really different, not all people write about ...

WOW. I knew from the start that you were a good writer. You see, one of the way you need to write lyrics the way you do. You had a ...

I will tell you one thing for sure this would make a very good bed time song that you could sing to the young kids. I also agree with missjuliesings5 ...

Hello, I am glad to critt this first. To be honest since I am a boy I don't get these lyrics at all. Beacuse lots of girls write these things, ...

Hello, I guess it is my turn to critt this lyric. Just to let you know I am not into the type of lyrics you wrote so I am sorry ...

This song was okay for me. I don't know why but I felt like heard this some where. Also you don't have to tell us if it is verse or ...

I liked the rap song! I do also disagree with you on some stuff you wrote, But this is not a debate club so I wont. The rhyming was awesome. ...

This was sad, dark and painful to read. It made my mood feel a little bit gloomy (but I am still a happy person) I wanted to ask you, is ...

Wow....Quite powerfull I must say. It would be cool if you transform this too scremo from poetry. I must say this was disturbing to read, but I think thats what ...

To be honest I am a little bit disappointed. because usually I would like the theme and the plot of your lyrics. I think this is your least good lyric. ...

This lyric is really beautiful, peaceful, pretty and especially smooth. I like the theme of this song and the rhyming a lot. I felt like this song was alive by ...

It was pretty good, but you did couple mistakes. Remember when ever you are telling what the characters are doing use ** this sine or (). For example: (Nerd three ...

Wasnt a song. its a rap. and io did it quickly. A rap could be a song man. Your ryhming was great and I could imagine some good music that ...

The rhyming was really good, the rhythm was very cool and the message of this song. The only thing I did not really like was: need some rest From all ...

*clap *clap (: I have to say the lyric sounded pretty cool, but the problem was that you had no theme in this lyric, no plot, and no explanation. It ...