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Oh! no, you weren't that harsh! I got some really useful stuff from you and I really appreciate it! I'm sorry if my reply was a little cold. I wrote ...

Well, in the story, i say that I named her Guadalupe because "named it Guadalupe, the girl that I sincerely hated, she was in my fourth grade class" The main ...

Oh! I'm so stupid! Why didn't I catch that! Thanks!

There is no pickle in the matrix movies. I just made it up and told what a pickle would be like in the matrix.

I didn't mean to squash it all together. I guess I was in a hurry. Sorry about that! I'll change it! Thanks for the review!

Straightforward as usual. Well, thanks for the review and the clear edits you would have made. I'm sorry, this poem is quite rough. In my defence, I wrote it at ...

ok. thanks for the review!

Yeah, I didn't mean to put the spaces in between each line.

I'm sorry if you didn't relate but this story was targeted at the people who do. I know I should make it so that everyone can relate but that's not ...

I loved the detail and flare in your poem! It was really interesting and eye catching. It was a little messy and a bit unclear, but other than that, it ...

I liked how you made a sort of message with the bold words, it's really creative! But, I have a few suggestions. I know it doesn't matter much, but it ...

OMG! I was so scared and shocked! I love how you led up to the fact that Jackie hated Sophie. But, I'm kinda confused, is her name Sophe? Or Sophie?