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I have to start by saying that this is really really great. The imagery was great, the rhyme scheme, the choice or words everything. It read like a story, and ...

This was extremely interesting. I loved the concept. My favorite part was the end where he thanks the man for his full day's pay and the line "12 dollars should ...

The Way's aways away from tomorrow but we're a step closer today The Way's aways away from tomorrow but closer than yesterday The Way's aways away form forever but forever ...

Hi I'm new to reviewing so don't expect this to be the greatest review, but i'll let you know what I think. I think that for your first poem it ...

I think this was very good. Aside from that last verse the entire poem flowed very nicely. I agree that maybe you should add an extra stanza and have it ...

haha this was funny. extremely entertaining. Obviously not a deep poem, but who says that poems need to be deep. The rhyme was almost perfect aside from that line about ...

i enjoyed this piece. To be honest I did not see a direct connection between the poem and the artwork, but then again I am sure it served as inspiration ...

I hate to be repetitive but the use of the nursery rhymes in this poem was really great. Also, i feel the subject is something most people can relate too. ...

I think this is great. If it is an introduction to a short story then i really can't wait for the finished product. Of course you can take this where ...

I do agree with everyone else that the second stanza needs a little work, but overall i found the poem to be great. My favorite stanza was definitely the first ...