lizzytink

i love your writing!! :) Diction is very important and you nailed it. good job, Lizz

Daddy, where are you? im around the corner and up your butt, sweetie oh okay mommy, where are you? im parked in the garage oh okay daddy? are you a ...

i love how you woke up in the middle of the night and how spontaneous this was. GOOD JOB!!! :))

okayyy... i like the idea that it seems as if the whole world left because you would lose your sanity quickly if you didnt have anyone to talk to. lolzombiess. ...

this sucks crap. you have no flow or potantial of writing.

slippery roots, wood spongy and pelted with moss, teaparty I misread pelted the first time as the verb rather than the adjective, which led, let me tell you, to quite ...

okay i know i already wrote a review but desperate times call for desperate measures. the poem needs a little more meat in it. it is a good poem but ...

the main chartacter is kinda wierd and the beggining needs a little more detail. like where he is going and stuff like that. i wasnt very cuaght in the beginning. ...

this is pretty good and all, but needs a little more detial