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Re: Trumpet Solo!
I really like the form for this poem and how certain lines are repeated. As for the name, I like the name you gave it. Great job!
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Snow Day
Thanks for pointing out that confusion. I didn't actually mean pillows though, I meant the snow when it is really powdery and like a pillow.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Shatter me, Break me
I really like this and think you did a great job! you worded it great and it makes a strong impression. I have no negative comments! The whole thing was ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: the wiles of love
I really like this poem. It has a nice flow and it sounds nice. I am confused as to the meaning of it. In the beginning it sounds like someone ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: Contest Entry- Poetry with a wonderland twist!
It was hilarious!! I think you captured the Mad Hatter perfectly. I think you did a great job and you made it really creative! keep up the good work! You ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Procrastination, Old Friend of Mine.
I like this poem a lot!!! I think it is awesome and can definitely relate to it. There are no suggestions I have other than keep writing awesome poems like ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 2
This is SO CUTE!!!! I love it and I think you did a great job rhyming it. I would never have been able to come up with a rhyme for ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Limerick 2
This is SO CUTE!!!! I love it and I think you did a great job rhyming it. I would never have been able to come up with a rhyme for ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: Realist
I thought that this poem was good! The only problem I have with it is that it gets a little hard to follow at the end. I really like the ...
Dec 2, 2011